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When I gave you my heart
You tore the veins out
And made them into bracelets
Ones which you sport on your razor slit wrists
And as the smoke filled the room
The trigger was pulled
You waited and you stared
Smile on your face
I wish I knew
I just wished you'd care
Almost half as much as I did
You wouldn't understand
Even if you tried
Heaven isn't the place
Where you go when you die
Heaven is on earth
When you feel most alive
I picked up the pieces of my broken heart
My broken ego
Save your energy
Save your lies
Keep crossing your fingers
Fake smiles are revealed in your eyes
And those tiny little fractures
The ones that used to make you cry
They become half the fun
In contributing to how you die
I watch in awe and disgust
How could I have fallen for you?
How could I have been so in love?
Your eyes lay still
Yet open wide
Still in them I can see the lies
Your fingers cold
Your skin is pale
Your alibies are still alive
Your lying motionless
Your heart is dust
I can't see how I could have loved you that much

...And with those bracelets of veins still on your cuts
I turn and walk away in disgust
I'll leave them on you so the paramedics know
You deserved what you got, and got what you deserved...
©2005-2009 ~Amusedpyro15
:iconamusedpyro15:

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Beautifully Depressing....at least that's what I'm going for

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:iconinconspicuous54:
typos: "alibis" i think. as always, hard-hitting piece.

--
"Speak lightly and with feeling-
My ears are an empty glass,
And your words, the richest nectar."
- ~Kame

"bare-knuckles bleeding a stylish red
we keep our mouths shut
and scream silence instead." - ~Slaneyder
:iconamusedpyro15:
prolly - I can't spell for the life of me. HeHe I'll change it. Thanks Ev.
:iconagonyandecstasy:
The bit about the veins around the wrists being bracelets would have to be my favorite. The rest of the poem could dissapear for all I care.
:iconamusedpyro15:
HaHa - Yeh - It started out as an away message saying

"When I Gave You My Heart You Tore The Veins Out And Made Them Into The Bracelets. Bracelets You Sport On Your Razor Slit Wrists...

My Attempt To Produce Beautifully Depressing Words...."

The rest flowed from that.
:iconinconspicuous54:
:] you know it's my pleasure. :hug:

--
"Speak lightly and with feeling-
My ears are an empty glass,
And your words, the richest nectar."
- ~Kame

"bare-knuckles bleeding a stylish red
we keep our mouths shut
and scream silence instead." - ~Slaneyder

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