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I met a new best friend today,
She listened to what I had to say.
Never once did she interrupt,
She wasn't evil or corrupt.
We wore the exact same thing,
Down to each and every ring.
She repeated everything I said,
Amazing, same blankets on our bed.
We looked exactly the same,
I thought my mind was playing a game.
She listened to my dreams,
She'd been in those too it seemed.
But when I reached out to pull her nearer...
I realized my new best friend was a just a mirror.
©2004-2009 ~Amusedpyro15
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Author's Comments

This is kind of a poem about how I feel when I'm talking to people and how they seem to only have time for their problems and not mine. I'm sure all of you have felt like that at least once in your life.......just admit it!

This poem was written in 01 so yea.....

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:iconamusedpyro15:
Thank You, It was written in 01 so yea....they get better...promise :P
:iconinconspicuous54:
this piece i REALLY like. it is sound both grammatically and mechanically. i REALLY like this piece!

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"Speak lightly and with feeling-
My ears are an empty glass,
And your words, the richest nectar."
- ~Kame

"bare-knuckles bleeding a stylish red
we keep our mouths shut
and scream silence instead." - ~Slaneyder
:iconbestxkeptxsecret:
whoaness!! this is awesome! =D yes i have felt like that some time or another...

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"and know the next time you make a wish upon a :star:, i'll be wishing on the same one that you do" ~the ataris :heart:

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April 7, 2004
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